I have so many deadlines for publishing magazines and other people's books, that my own writing has been getting pushed aside lately, so I sat down and cranked this out for my upcoming novel "The White Death." Five minutes of writing and I felt like I'd taken a week's vacation. I think I'll ignore a few deadlines and write some more. The deadlines will still be there in the morning.
*****
“I’m being followed,” said Kirk.
“So I need you to get something to someone for me. You got to help me, Charlene.”
He was breathing hard. Out of shape as always. Served him right climbing up her fire escape
at two in the morning. He stood near the
window silhouetted in the nightlight’s soft glow like a mugger in a dimly lit
alley.
“You can’t keep breaking into my
place,” said Charlene. “You scared me
half to death.”
“Sorry.”
“I get a boyfriend someday and
you might get shot. You ever think of
that? And where’d you get that raggedy-ass
jacket?”
“In a dumpster,” said Kirk.
One arm held a typing paper sized
box to his chest. The other held the
bottom of his coat tight over his stomach like he was about to throw up.
“You’re wearing something from a
dumpster?”
With his silvered sunglasses and
leather hat, he looked like a park ranger on dope when he nodded his
agreement. He was the only man she knew with
eyes so sensitive he wore sunglasses at night.
And she wasn’t sure how Kirk managed a coherent thought, but he did seem
to know when to nod even when sloshed.
“You like it?”
Quarter inch of stubble on him
looked like fuzz on a turkey’s neck in the dim light.
“You have to go in the other room
while I get dressed,” she said.
“I thought I was in the other
room.”
“Go,” she said.
Blankets held clutched in front of her breasts, she pointed toward the living room.
“You got beer?”
“Kirk, get out and close the door
behind you so I can get dressed,” she repeated.
“Don’t turn the lights on, okay?”
“Go.”
9 comments:
I know what you mean. I got back to some of my writing last night after several days of nothing but editing and man it was fun.
Fuzz on a turkey's neck - good analogy. Deadlines are overrated.
Some people think of writing as work, but I'm telling you Charles, it's nothing but good, clean, fun.
Alex, you're right- deadlines are overrated.
"He was the only (Only What?) she knew with eyes so sensitive he wore sunglasses at night."
"Blankets held clutched in her right hands in front of her breasts" (Huh? Does she have two right hands?)
Sorry Rick, I couldn't turn off the inner editor. :) I liked the excerpt. I'm sure it was a lot more fun than mag deadlines. Don't publish this in the comments. I was just having some editing fun with you. :)
LOL- that's what I get for mot editing before I post. Thanks, Bernard!
Rick,
I like the excerpt too. I read it so quickly I didn't notice what Bernard did. Good job with creating tension with the scene. ;)
Wow, I may have to call upon Bernard. :-D
Thanks, Tyhitia. With you and Bernard watching over any excerpts I post, I think I'm in safe hands!
Deadlines = work. Ick, I say.
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