Thursday, July 02, 2009

The Fifth Dragons of Creative Writing- Part One of Seven, The Dragon of Putrefaction, An Introduction



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The three robed figures moved away in unison across the deck, their steps silent beneath their robes as if they floated above the planking. Crewman eyed them with uneasy glances. Several crossed themselves and quickly looked away.

A pushy, persistent wind threw shredded rags of clouds overhead, billowing them like a poor man’s laundry across a cerulean sky of textured Tiffany glass. As the pale sun disappeared behind the clouds, the Professor pulled his collar tighter to his neck.

Captain Baker pretended not to notice.

excerpted from "The Bedlamite," by Ferrel D. Moore


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"For many who work deeply with spiritual transformation, the goal may seem to be the healing of and freedom from past pain and suffering. When this goal appears to have been reached, there’s a tendency to believe that there will be no further difficult experiences. We think that because we’ve worked so hard, we’ve cleared it all out. Our life from that point will be idyllic and serene.



This is such a common experience of lulling ourselves into yet another type of unconsciousness. This sets us up for the shock of an even more challenging experience wherein the ego is again thrown into the fiery cauldron for further transformation. In alchemy, this is called the Putrefaction - Fermentation stage.


"Here, we again face the ego’s insistence on dominance, but there is an important difference in the quality, intensity, and source of the experience. Unlike the experience in the first stage of Calcination, where we were alone in our battle with the ego, this time we sense another force assisting us. Although the initial part of this fifth stage, Putrefaction, can be very disturbing, and we may be thrown into a pit of depression or despair, it feels like we are being held up, supported, even encouraged in the process."
Alchemy Journal Number 2, Volume 5 "The Alchemy in Spiritual Progress Part 5: Putrefaction" by Nanci ShanderĂ¡, Ph.D.


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But what does this mean to the writer? Let's look at this before we return to the story, because we are about to journey into the rareified air where writers and the world of spirit merge. Are you an atheist or an agnostic? No matter, I'm not talking religion. But, if you think that all there is to a writer is isolation, if you think that a writer is a mere bag of chemicals restrained by skin and with an organic computer for a brain, if you think that parsimonious economy trumps abundance and theme transcends hope, then there may not be much of interest to you from here forward.


If our hearts cannot feel the reassuring touch of spirit, we shall someday fall to self-manufactured neural networks that have no real need of poetry at all. To create a different world, where the spirit of mankind can outpace its technological assemblages, it is necessary to tap into the centers of our being. This is the true realm of the saintly and the mad- the writers, musicians, artists, and poets who fearfully descend into the darkness of their subconscious to find the pinpointed lights of starlight that float within their soul, and bring back the imageries of both to share with those of us too afraid to make the journey on our own.


In the laboratory of the human heart, as in any other laboratory, one distallation is not enough. To achieve the highest degree of purity, to become rectified, the process must be repeated over and again to remove the dross of our lives so that we may move forward free from impurities.


Consider, if you will, Walt Whitman's life work. After his initial ephiphany that produced the staggering yet slender first edition titled "The Leaves of Grass," he continued to spend his lifetime re-writing, expanding, and refining that great work. Yet, because he was fearful of facing those aspects of himself that had not been cleansed by his first illumination, the remaining editions (save, the third, which is, as even Malcom Cowley agrees, a masterwork), display the efforts of a craftsman, not a towering genius.



His initial succes, achieved by abandoning his ego, were supplanted by the return of his ego. Try as he might, he never again achieved the breadth of literary power that had called the praise-parsimonious Emerson to announce, "I greet you at the beginning of a great career..."



Even the great Whitman was afraid to attempt a second re-birth by journeying inward to face the blackest elements of himself. Calcination had been quite enough for him. Walt Whitman, the great American Poet of the Everyman, feared to face the Dragon of Putrefaction.



I once asked an elderly alchemist what I should do to become a great writer. "It is the same for anything creative," she said. "Abandon the craft and find yourself."



"That is a new-age platitude," I said. I was angry with what I thought to be her flippant response.



"I wish that were true," she said. "In truth, it is not hard to create compelling stories- if the writer stays out of the way."



28 comments:

Charles Gramlich said...

Lana and I were talking about some of this the other day. People sometimes act as if "self-work" is like building a building. Once it's built all is done. It's really more like housework. It just keeps piling up.

Rick said...

And something always happens to distract us from it, too, Charles. Writers seem almost iron-disciplined in our practice of procrastination.

laughingwolf said...

well said, rick...

hard to get out of my own way

as for procrastination... i do it well, too

Rick said...

Laughingwolf, I think that procrastination comes with being a writer. It must be in the vaccine they give us when we're kids!

Silver said...

Hi Rick- oops.. how did i miss your comment last night? well, it was past my bedtime..(10pm for me..:)Country pumpkin.

have i been here before coz it feel somewhat familiar?

Nice writings by Nanci Shandera. i will read a litle more after gettting my coffee. ;)

~Silver

Rick said...

Silver- Coffee helps with everything! And yes, Nancy can be rather insightful, can't she?

laughingwolf said...

i await a cure for that vaccine, bro! :O

Middle Ditch said...

Hi Rick, I was here (at your older post) last night when the phone rang. It was my eldest daughter who told me that she is going to invest in two kittens, she got them today and I feel a little like a grandmother. Then Coronation Street began and I had to leave in haste.

Your posts are always such a fascinating read and I come back to them again and again trying to understand it all. I'm a little slow and was a very slow learner as a child(not recognized as such in those days) but reading and writing were my forte even though my writing was never encouraged by anyone.

I'll be back to read some more.

Rick said...

laughingwolf, friend, I suspect you and I and almost are writers are somewhat incurable!

Rick said...

Coronation Street? My whole family watches that show (except for me since I mostly use my television for watching training videos)!

Someday, if your daughter sends you pictures, you should post them on your blog. By the way, do you have a Middle Ditch website? I never even thought to look.

And I'll bet your teachers really thought of you as methodical and creatively gifted, don't you? They are usually, my mother told me years ago, the ones who do well and bring honor to the family name. So they probably gave you lots of space. Like Nathanial Hawthorne, you have worked hard and waited patiently for the recognition that would one day be inevitably yours.

Akasha Savage said...

Hiya Rick. The publishing house that are wanting short stories for their supernatural anthology are a new independent publishers called Rebel Books. You can find them at www.rebelbookspublishing.co.uk

It's worth a look.

K.Lawson Gilbert said...

So, that I understand this, do we go to the core of WHO we are then, and not WHAT we are? And does ego here mean self esteem, exaggerated opinion of one's self, simply the individual self, or part of the mind that contains consciousness? A combination? So the ego can't be done away with all together, but what I hear you saying is that we can transform the ego.

We can't just throw out craft, can we? Is it content first and THEN craft?

I am very intrigued by this wonderful post, and can't wait for further instruction and enlightenment on putrefaction. Thanks, Rick.

Middle Ditch said...

I know of a great writer who kept on re-writing his novel long after it was published. Such a waste of energy. This should have been plugged into another story but was not. He slowly wasted away and no more novel has been forthcoming.

I have seen the kittens on Facebook catbook where my cats also are and the are so cute, as all kittens are. And no Rick, I left school at 14, and am sure that I was forgotten about just about straight away and the website idea has played in our minds. Who knows, we might just do this one day.

Take care

Kathryn Magendie said...

What a facinating and thought provoking post this is!

Rick said...

Thanks, Akasha, I'll head to that web address and check it out. New publishing houses are good!

Rick said...

Hello, K. those are great questions! Instead of defining the ego, would you mind terribly if I started somewhere else? I'll start with the ego's survival instinct, which is what brings about the need for the second death. Consider what happened to Walt Whitman. It was a universal experience similar to the experienced by Ueshiba, the Founder of Aikido in his golden moment. But Ueshiba, by whatever divine enlightenment, understood what Whitman did not- that momentary illumination, however magnificent its radiance, will fade as the ego re-establishes itself. I think that Whitman, whose work I greatly admired, never actually understood the root of his work. So when the accolades began to pour in and he began to establish a reputation, his ego could not help to reassert itself. Eventually, his linkage to the Divine Muse became more and more tenuous, until he was left with only his own poetic talent.

A long answer, yes? But allow me to continue with what is more important still- the writer, the poet, the artist, the musician- these are what are important. Transform them and the result will be more powerful than if we tinkered with craft or content. So the ego, if in the way of the story, poem, painting, or song- must be superceded by the spirit, for it is from their that the true art of storytelling proceeds.

Rick said...

Monique, you remind me of Louis L'Amour in his wonderful book on self-education.

I hope you do go ahead with a website for Middle Ditch. You've created something with, I believe, an enduring appeal and you can count me as a loyal listener.

Rick said...

I'm so glad that you dropped by Kathryn! Come again.

the walking man said...

Don't procrastinate...read TWM today Rick.

Rick said...

Just dropped by your blog and left you a note that I'll be there at her book signing. It's a brutal week, but we need to support each other.

I'll put out the word.

Christina said...

You always have the best pictures to go with what you are saying. I'm glad you're back. This corner of my universe was starting to get lonely.

Rick said...

I'm really glad to be back, Christina. I have to spend more time on your blog going back through posts to see what's going on in your writing world. I'm figuring your either doing the book signing circuit with Leigh Russell or on the verge of publishing respectability. I'll be by later!

Natasha Fondren said...

Oh cool, I like this. Sometimes, though, I think that stuff comes up from the center of my being is from a place I wouldn't dare go. When I later look at it, I can see where it comes from and it totally freaks me out, LOL! It's like all my secretest secrets are there.

But I guess maybe that might be like getting out of my way to let it come up, LOL. :-)

Rick said...

Hi Natasha! YOur secret secrets are the stuff of great stories I would wager. They would stretch your creative skills and perhaps be the stuff of risky, yet riveting writing.

PS, I absolutely love the new look you have for your blog!

mystic rose said...

And I do like your favorite music :).

You visited my blog on one of the off days. :)

Rick said...

Mystic Rose, your off days must constitute really great days for everyone else as your writing was not only inspiring, but impeccable.

Barbara Martin said...

Learning to leave your old ego-based life behind is difficult for some, rick. But once that is accomplished, then the real progress begins with facing new challenges and working through them to the next level.

Rick said...

I'm glad you put it that way, Barbara, because I wonder if in writing, as in most of life, that is the turning point in an individual's efforts to contribute to humanity on larger scale.